| Author |
 Topic  |
|
cpatch
Ahonui
USA
2187 Posts |
 Posted - 02/19/2003 : 8:15:27 PM
|
Raymond, I made a bunch of changes and cleaned up some stuff including fixing a few okinas. (Someone who speaks the language should probably verify all the Hawaiian is correct!) Here's the list with my corrections to save you the time...I'll modify this post and delete the list after you update yours:
A. Andy Wang: Double Slack Swing (Original)
B. Keith Marzullo: Lahainaluna (Kui Lee)
C. Russell Letson: Morning Dew (Eddie Kamae and Larry Kimura)
D. Lawrence Bryant: Moe `Uhane (Sonny Chillingworth)
E. Hideki Hattori: Kalena Kai (Charles E. King)
F. John W. Nelson: Wai Ulu (Lala Mahelona & George Kalelohi, Sr.)
G. Breeze Please: Aloha `Oe/Isa Lei, (Queen Lili`uokalani/Traditional)
H. Leo Kahilliwa: Queen's Jubilee (Queen Lili`uokalani)
I. Craig Patchett: Kani Ki Ho`alu (Ozzie Kotani)
J. Cynthia Bryant: Kaulana `O Hilo Hanakahi (Lena Machado)
K. Don Narup: Don's Mele (Original)
L. Sarah Whitaker: Auwe! (Ray Kane)
M. Gary Anwyl: Mino`aka (Keola Beamer)
N. Stacey Moore: Mauna Loa (Helen Parker)
O. R.J. Stovich: Ku`u Lei `Awapuhi (Emily Taylor)
P. Ross: Nanea Kou Maka I Ka Le`ale`a/Salomila (King David Kalakaua/Traditional)
Q. Lee Thovson: Mauna Loa (Helen Parker)
R. Dusty Foster: Hula Medley (Traditional)
S. Fran Guidry: Saimin Slack Key `Ekahi (Original)
T. George Kahumoku, Jr: Ku Lana Kila (Original)
U. Indy: Slack Key Lullaby (Led Ka`apana)
V. Cmdr. Piffle: He Mele A Kahi Haole I Kaleponi (Original)
Extras:
W. Cynthia and Lawrence Bryant: Ku`u Lei `Awapuhi (Emily Taylor)
X. SF's Na Leo Nahenahe Chorus: Moloka`i Nui A Hina (Traditional)
|
Craig
My goal is to be able to play as well as people think I can. |
Edited by - cpatch on 02/21/2003 01:14:52 AM |
 |
|
|
Reid
Ha`aha`a
Andorra
1526 Posts |
Posted - 02/19/2003 : 8:29:38 PM
|
I am only moderately good in Hawaiian, but I know that "Queen Liliokalani" should be: Queen Lili`uokalani. Sarah should or somebody else should go over it as I think there are a few `okinas missing (We won't talk about kahakös ;-)
...Reid |
|
|
|
Reid
Ha`aha`a
Andorra
1526 Posts |
Posted - 02/19/2003 : 9:40:12 PM
|
Sarah sez: ( I am logged on but she is looking this over)
Queens' Jubilee s/b: Queen's Jubilee
Kaulana O Hilo Hanakahi s/b: Kaulana `O Hilo Hanakahi
Ku`u Lei Awapuhi s/b: Ku`u Lei`Awapuhi (it is OK lower down in Larry and Cynthia's piece.)
Saimin Slack Key Ekahi s/b: Saimin Slack Key `Ekahi
Check with Cmdr. Piffle about what he wanted the title to mean. The O E is not clear to Sarah as a Hawaiian construction, nor is Ka Liponia.
OR: Cmdr, sir, just tell us and Sarah will translate. She guesses that you want to say "A Song by a Haole in California, in which case it would be: "He Mele a kahi haole i Kaleponi", lit. "A Song by one (a) Haole in California".
...Us in CT |
|
|
|
rossasaurus
Lokahi
USA
306 Posts |
Posted - 02/19/2003 : 9:59:51 PM
|
Oh, CPatch, could you change the name on the S.F. Nahenahe Chorus to SF's Na Leo Nahenahe Chorus?
thanks,
Ross |
|
|
|
RJS
Ha`aha`a
1635 Posts |
Posted - 02/19/2003 : 10:37:18 PM
|
Craig,
I can't make corrections to your posting. Can you either take over and keep the corrections current, or email your list to me and I'll take it from there. I use letters because it's easier to set up the CD, don't have to worry about where 11, 12, etc go.
Raymond |
|
|
|
cmdrpiffle
`Olu`olu
USA
553 Posts |
Posted - 02/19/2003 : 11:14:01 PM
|
Sarah and Reid,
Yes, you would be correct as to the meaning of my piece.
It was actually suggested by Marzullo, and I went with the
title after reading the suggestions.
My apologies for the mistakes, I simply do not know the language.
Craig, you getting all this?! Please change the title to what Sarah and Reid suggest a few posts above this one, okeydokey
Mahalo, and thankyou for shopping Lihue K Mart.
with my laptop continuing to mock me..
I am,
o |
my Poodle is smarter than your honor student |
|
|
|
marzullo
`Olu`olu
USA
923 Posts |
Posted - 02/20/2003 : 12:05:57 PM
|
yes, mike's hawaiian mistakes are indeed mine (i'm studying the language, but have a long ways to go, and the title i wrote was a joke).
to whomever, despite what huapala says, the more common name for my entry is written as one word, "Lahainaluna", not "Lahaina luna" (which may be more correct, but you'd have to ask sarah).
aloha,
keith
|
Keith |
|
|
|
cpatch
Ahonui
USA
2187 Posts |
Posted - 02/20/2003 : 12:12:40 PM
|
OK, all changes incorporated as of this post. Raymond, I'm more than happy to take it over if you want, although that wasn't my original intention. If you prefer to maintain it you should be able to copy and paste in your browser. If not, let me know and I'll email it to you.
Keith, a quick search on the Web showed Lahainaluna for the place name but Lahaina Luna for the song title, which is why I changed it originally.
|
Craig
My goal is to be able to play as well as people think I can. |
Edited by - cpatch on 02/20/2003 12:14:48 PM |
|
|
|
marzullo
`Olu`olu
USA
923 Posts |
Posted - 02/20/2003 : 2:05:50 PM
|
craig, in fact all of the newspaper articles i found about kui lee, and george kahumoku's biography, call the song "lahainaluna". this doesn't address the real question - what did kui lee use? - but in the absence of any other information, i would guess the song is about the place and so should be spelled the same way.
academically (and probably insufferably),
keith
|
Keith |
|
|
|
Reid
Ha`aha`a
Andorra
1526 Posts |
Posted - 02/20/2003 : 2:49:55 PM
|
Craig, I know transcription in Hawaiian is hard, but Lili`uokalani is still misspelled.
You can just copy and paste what I just typed. Her name is probably the most sensitive, culturally, in the playlist.
Thanks for doing this guys, I know it must be a pain.
Keith and Cmdr: No pilikia about the made-up title; we just wanted to help you out.
...Reid |
|
|
|
RJS
Ha`aha`a
1635 Posts |
Posted - 02/20/2003 : 3:16:07 PM
|
Craig,
If you can keep your posting updated in this thread, once people are satisfied that what is posted is as good as we can reasonably get, I'll copy it and take it from there. If you don't want to do this, let me know, I'll copy it, cut it in place of my initial list and follow it from that point
Raymond |
|
|
|
cmdrpiffle
`Olu`olu
USA
553 Posts |
Posted - 02/20/2003 : 7:22:25 PM
|
Reid and Marzullo,
Absolutely no offense intended or recieved, after I read Marzullo's suggestion, I thought it was funny as hell, and true. I love it! Thanks for fine tuning it.
Mike |
my Poodle is smarter than your honor student |
|
|
|
RJS
Ha`aha`a
1635 Posts |
Posted - 02/20/2003 : 10:56:11 PM
|
DUSTY (Craig)
I need the mailing address for you (Dusty) to send CD
Raymond Stovich
San Jose
|
|
|
|
cpatch
Ahonui
USA
2187 Posts |
Posted - 02/21/2003 : 01:18:35 AM
|
quote:
Originally posted by Reid
Craig, I know transcription in Hawaiian is hard, but Lili`uokalani is still misspelled.
Sorry, I should know better...I was rushing the changes this morning. Fixed now (hopefully)!
|
Craig
My goal is to be able to play as well as people think I can. |
|
|
|
wdf
Ha`aha`a
USA
1153 Posts |
Posted - 02/21/2003 : 4:53:32 PM
|
Raymond,
I emailed you my address. |
Dusty |
|
|
|
Topic |
|
Topic Locked
