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Ray Sowders
Akahai
USA
96 Posts |
Posted - 07/19/2009 : 5:13:41 PM
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Howzit Gang,
Kden, the new site is up. www.raysowders.com I will need to make some changes to make pages load faster, but the feedback I get from you folks will help me to address multiple items...I have a list that is growing already :) I was telling a friend that I feel like "Neo" (from The Matrix) and I took the really wrong pill...but, old dudes like me can still learn and improve as we go eh? Thanks in advance for your help and input...a hui hou,
Ray
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sm80808
Lokahi
347 Posts |
Posted - 07/19/2009 : 7:46:57 PM
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Looks good Ray.
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neeej
`Olu`olu
USA
643 Posts |
Posted - 07/19/2009 : 9:19:16 PM
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Nice site :-) One small bit of nitpickerie, howsomever: remove the apostrophe from "video's" at the top of the page. |
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LovinLK
Lokahi
USA
112 Posts |
Posted - 07/20/2009 : 7:30:22 PM
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I found a lot of grammatical errors and formatting errors in most of your pages. Also remove the apostrophe from CDs, 50s, 60s, etc. 'Okina missing from Ho'omalia. Lots of inconsistencies in the text. Went through all of it. Send me an email and I can help fix all of that. I write for a living and am spelling and grammar police!!! |
Lovin' Lee is my favorite pasttime!!
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markwitz
`Olu`olu
USA
841 Posts |
Posted - 07/21/2009 : 06:12:32 AM
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quote: Originally posted by LovinLK
I write for a living and am spelling and grammar police!!!
I thought pastime was spelled with only one t. |
"The music of the Hawaiians, the most fascinating in the world, is still in my ears and haunts me sleeping and waking." Mark Twain |
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Ray Sowders
Akahai
USA
96 Posts |
Posted - 07/22/2009 : 12:23:13 PM
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Mahalo for everybodys suggestions and comments. I will do what I can to incorporate the edits into my site. It may take a little while to get everybodys edits entered, but check back in a while if you can...hopefully the improvements bring folks back to see what else I put on the site. Thaks again...Ray |
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markwitz
`Olu`olu
USA
841 Posts |
Posted - 07/24/2009 : 03:21:03 AM
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Have been listening to "Kukuna Mehana". Very, very nice. Very nahenahe. Great voice that reminds me of Mike Auldridge from a Bluegrass group called "The Seldom Scene". That comparison is meant to be a big compliment. |
"The music of the Hawaiians, the most fascinating in the world, is still in my ears and haunts me sleeping and waking." Mark Twain |
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